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Saturday, March 3, 2007

Nature is a Wonder!


Wow , it’s a wonder, Nature is a wonder !!
Starts in the sky, twinkles - to denote,
Only darkness can explore the best in u!!

Wow , it’s a wonder, Nature is a wonder !!
Shells holding pearls, lives in sea - to denote,
Adventure the talents embedded in u!!

Wow , it’s a wonder, Nature is a wonder !!
River flow against the rocks, reaches sea - to denote,
Life is a struggle, but finally u will succeed!!

Wow , it’s a wonder, Nature is a wonder !!

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

very natural n real....cool!!

David said...

Nice

Unknown said...

nice poems.....

Anonymous said...

hey its lik rhyme da..... good can be suggested for kids dear :)

Unknown said...

ou gave me a strong impression and instigated me to attempt the poetry. As your are the prime impression behind my humble effort, I dedicate this maiden attempt solely to you....
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The Secret Key !
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Wow ! Nature is a Wonder!…Full of Splendor!
Its all the work of fender….worth to ponder..

Hear the pounding thunder….is it nature’s blunder!
See the lash of lightening.…is it nature’s way of frightening!
Sparge of Mega volts charge.…is it meant to vanish at large!
Deluge of downpours…. to drive away draught or drown dwelling lot..

Wow ! Nature is a Wonder!…Full of Splendor!
Its all the work of fender….worth to ponder..

Invent to harness…. the so far un-harnessed…
Invent to contrive…the so far un-retrieved…
Invent the pathway… to the un-fathomed…
Active grey matter is the secret key factor gifted by creator
Unlock the unsolicited gifts… endorse a deserved lift..

Wow ! Nature is a Wonder!…Full of Splendor!
Its all the work of fender….worth to ponder..