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Thursday, April 26, 2007

Hidden Memories!!

Long long ago, I had a friend,
She took rights in my life trends,
I started off to be her friend,
I knew it would never end.

Friendship is a covalent bond,
Sharing is the speciality,
We shared our thoughts in reality,
She became close to my heart,
Struggling together was an art.

When i was driven away,
She made me comfort.
When she was driven,
I was a wheel carryin her-hence,
She was hurt neither way.

It was my birthday,
Many presented gifts,
She too gave one,
It was simple and rich.

Words were her gift,
A tremendrous gift..

She presented simple words as a poem,
She gifted the richest love as tears.

I unwrapped the poem,
It described pains,
When she was in vein,
I again promised,
I won't leave her.

I knew nothing is permanent in life,
This time, i was against it.

I unwrapped the poem again,
I felt the descriptive words power.

A stanza contained fun and happiness,
A stanza contained pains and tears,
I loved the later one-as,
I always feel her presence then..

If I get a chance to decsribe her,
I will choose the four letter word,

"PAIN"

She is pain in me - yes,
She symbolizes pain alone..

Life turned very critical,
College life had a moral change,

"A Full Stop".

We completed our studies
We set on to work,
We realized the parameter,

"TIME".

we hardly had no time to speak,
we hardly had no time to care,
we hardly had no time to share,

The factor lagged everywhere,
Still we successfully kicked it..

Life had a great turn,
Everyone settled well-but,
Our hearts were in fire,
We stayed in touch through messages..

One fine day we met,
It was time, she said,

"Wedding.."

Signature of her wedding smiled,
We gathered for her again,
Life made us learn,
Time is precious- still,
We lagged in it to the core.

Everything stopped.
Messages, mails and phones..

Even then she found a way to meet,
We cented at eachothers place a week,
It continued many years,
Now am left alone with tears.

Yes! Her voice faded away,
She parted away,
Not from me,

From this "WORLD!"

She is no more- i cried,
Still her prescence accompanied,
I felt lonely, but not deserted
She is always with me.

The greatest gift she gave me,
To continue friendship with - was,

"Her child"

Friendship bloomed with her children,
I never had any prayers,
Now I prayed for our friendship!

Yes! it do continued for many generations.

It was the real happiness,I faced,
I felt the greatest relationship of life,

"Friendship"

To care n share,
A step above love,
Was "Friendship"

I have no words to say,
All were my memories,
Hidden memories, in heart!

Now am taking off to meet her in heaven!

-Jayanthi.S.

This poem is written for my friend by me from his part.. I wish this will happen.. !!

9 comments:

ARun said...

this s one of the very good poem which i ve read...! hats off

ARun said...

this s one of the very good poem which i ve read...! hats off

KC'S said...

nice poem j.......a gud rhyming 2.....used ur words in a gr8 way.....

Shan said...

No words to xpress something seems to good... stay chill...

Unknown said...

Excellent thoughts & nice poems..

Unknown said...

what to say bout this poem very touching no words to appreciate

Anonymous said...

very good and nice touchin tauts.. i wish i had a frd lik this.... i want a frd lik this to gift me lik this.... jus love this peace...

Unknown said...

Hey awesome poems da.. They were really mind blowing.. Keep rockin..

madforluv said...

hi..its nice ......great..i like it very much...goin to send to one of my friend.