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Sunday, June 24, 2007

Mother!

Mother!, She is a cursive art,
Let her sleep, its a sunday's part!

The dawn has set in a will,
The limpid heart is sleeping still!

Her work is wide than a tide,
Making her face fade a slight!

Mother!, She is a cursive art,
Let her sleep, its a sunday's part!

The Queen of Kingdom rests in peace,
The Queen of Home sets in work!

Her job is an endless ocean,
My smile for her is boosting mark!

Mother!, She is a cursive art,
Let her sleep, its a sunday's part!

Sunday is a great relief,
To recharge her mind and physic!

Its my part to pat her today,
Let her sleep, come on sunday!!

Mother! She is a cursive art,
Let her sleep, its a sunday's part!

6 comments:

Karthik said...

Her work is wide than a tide,
Making her face fade a slight!


the first line to comparision with tide is great ...i have not heard any where....but the second line needs a recheckk with the beauty of the first line

sundu said...

intha poemthan enaku pudichiruku.. :)

Anonymous said...

Hey...
Nice one!

Liked it very much...

Anonymous said...

hey actually i too wish to give mom rest but i lik her sunday spl a lot....

anyways gud work

Raj kamal said...

well..after reading dis..da 1st thing i did was..went 2 my mom n hugged her!!...well dis is true!!...

the main thought of dis poem 2 giv rest 2 her mother is xcellent!!
i liked it very much!

thnx J!!

Unknown said...

Gud 1 agen yaar...
I love ma mother n i love dis poem 2>