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Sunday, July 15, 2007

Alone with Love!!

All through the darksome days had ever gone,
You were the only Spark Of Light for me!

Even when I’m wrong,
You were near to chasten me,
And, you’re the only one to hug me with love!


Oh! So deep you have shot me with your eyes!
Love, I have gone mad by your sweet smile!


Its got to (gotta) rain so fast in my heart,
I never knew you can make me so soft!

In every hit of success,
I concede I wouldn’t have done,
If you were not behind this poor guy..!

Even in my rebirth I will love you!
You are the cause for me to breathe in!

Oh! I swear, I will never leave you,
Because (Cuz) you are the only one,
I will always adore!

Jesus please let my Love be happy!!

Oh! So deep you have shot me with your love!
Love, I have gone mad y your sweet smile!

12 comments:

Premjith Aravindan said...
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Premjith Aravindan said...

If its you who really wrote this piece.. Then HATS OFF TO YOU!!

If it's really what your heart says... Then I wish I LOVED YOU :-)

sundu said...

english kavithaigal enaku onum purila .....
Aanalum nallariku ...

Anonymous said...

One word to say....

AWESOME !!!

Nice one, im gonna copy and reproduce it with my name.. hehehe..


Im sure you enjoyed writing it, so....

KC'S said...

hahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!

oraaaaaa comedy tha .........

yeppidi j unnala mattum eppidi comedy panna mudiyuthu??

Anonymous said...

Really AWESOME and I enjoyed reading it.

Unknown said...

the poem is really nice awesome

Unknown said...

really good congrats 4 writing such a poem

Anonymous said...

gr8 jayanthi,,,,,

s thts the tru feeling of love.....

Anonymous said...

Madam.. So, u in Love???

Hmm... etho nadakudae..

intha poem ku king must be gifted to have u..

Unknown said...

Hey its rely wondeful yaar!!!
n no 1 can write it widoout being in love hehe[:P]

Unknown said...

This poem is an eye-opener about widely existing misconception of the four letter word LOVE. To what extent we have moved away from the original context of this word is blatantly obvious like a stroke of lightening while we read through to the end of this poem.
Hope this may induce us to return to its ancient original context without narrowing down and bending its intended meaning and values.